Rough Cuts





Front Cover

Feedback:

Like:

• Strong colour scheme, good use of colour in text.
• Looking wise this has real potential.
• The '+' sign.

Improvements:

• Make title bigger and put it higher.
• Take picture again - too blurry, model looks bored.
• Lots of dead space, fill it.
• Brandon Flowers font is difficult to read. 



Contents page

Feedback:

Like:

• Good continuation of style, start of a good layout.
• Love the drop down on the 'N'.
• Love the left half.
• Like the colours.
• Like the pictures.

Improvements:

• Don't like the circle in the top corner.
• Too much dead space.
• Image is boring.
• Remove the star thing at the bottom.
• Make page numbers on the images larger.

Double Page Spread:

Like:

• Good layout, top section looks pro.
• Like the colours.
• Like the circle.
• Like the title.
• The best element of the project.

Improvements:

• Don't like the responses centred. Justify them.
• Image is too plain.
• Wheres the magazine name and page number?
• Questions different colour.
• Can't read the writing in the black box.